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Awaken.

Should it be fair for the moon to die
In Aphrodite's dreams full of grace and gold
When i fall For J's love or should i say a lie
Every beat of my heart turns out blue for cold

One single tear,and J's curves boilin'on my chest
I just don't wanna recall anymore the taste of that rain...
But the trembling game of warm legs in a furious quest
And the vanishing of that us easing the killing pain

Embrasses made of blinds and i,one nice aliby in her sight
I can't beleive i stayed so long for a lying hidden breath
When she don't belong to me and never cared if i'm right

I'll let go with every emotion...every trace of a conscient death
So far the time when i cared of gifts, and pure tenderness
so far,i,now, will only burn of an infinite rage of...emptyness.


Blake Summers.
©2008-2009 *Hemingway81
:iconhemingway81:

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The sound within: [link]

Just wakin up, it's a sonnet, full of rage and somehow, the ghost of a past love remains...:sadangel:

i guess i should say it's about Johanne, she don't care anyway, so the "J", i'm sorry if any of you reading this thought it was about... you, it happened actually, and that's why i think i had to explain.. =)

sorry for my english...i'm only french...



Blake.:butterflytwo:

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:iconjamesisdead:
Really like this. Excellent English I must say!
I do love the first line "Should it be fair for the moon to die". Really like that.

Well done :).

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:iconhemingway81:
yes, i've heard that before, people seem to love the spirit of that first verse in particular...i'm kinda flattered i'm the one who bleed...sorry, who wrote it ;)

Blake.:butterflytwo:

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When u read 4 urself, whose voice do u hear in your head? [T.L.S]
:iconen-couleur:
Nice images in this.
"warm legs in a furious quest"

Amazing English. If I were to try to write a poem in French... it'd be well... rubbish.

Nice job (:
:iconhemingway81:
ah^^...what can i say.....many thanks, yes....:hug:

Blake.:butterflytwo:

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When u read 4 urself, whose voice do u hear in your head? [T.L.S]
:iconen-couleur:
you're very welcome (:

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